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-- Exhibit -Sentence 9:A flyer enclosed with the invoice states that your association will have received "a portion of the proceeds."
Which is the best way to write the underlined portion of this sentence? If the original is the best way, choose optionA.

• A. have received
• B. had received
• C. will receive
• D. will have received
• E. are receiving

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Sentence 8:An enormous number of unhealthy microorganisms will become attached to these cleaning materials if not sanitized frequently.
The most effective revision of sentence 8 would begin with which group of words?

• A. Cleaning attachments and enormous numbers
• B. An enormous number of cleaning materials are attached
• C. Frequent microorganisms and attached materials
• D. If these cleaning materials are not sanitized frequently,
• E. Becoming attached to unhealthy microorganisms and

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The Internet
(A)

• A. are shaping
• B. is shaping
• C. has been shaping
• D. will shaping
• E. shaping
• F. We use the Internet or hear about it almost daily.B.However, there was a time when the Internet was known to just a network of scientists who used it as a means to communicate research information.C.They lived all over the world, the idea of calling on the phone was a major problem and a major expense.D.Faxing was a problem also if they wanted to keep their ideas secret.E.This group of international scientists needed a means to share their information with each other.
  (B)
  (6)
  In 1989, computer scientist Timothy Berners-Lee created a system that enabled an elite group of scientists to communicate with one another.(7) The original goal of the scientists is to share information that was number- and text-based.(8) This format was an easy procedure for the early computers and computer programs to use.
  (C)
  (9)
  Many other people were interested in this"new"exchange of information for a few reasons.(10) It was much cheaper than a long distance phone call or fax, and it provided
  some privacy.(11) Soon, others were experimenting with this new communication device.(12) Eventually, a group of people at the Massachusetts Institute of technology developed the World Wide Web.
  (D)
  (13)
  Changes that are made in computers and the way they communicate with each other provide the opportunity for the Web to evolve.(14) This evolution continue to change the way we allcommunicatewith each other, too.(15) To do more than just communicate today, the Web is used.(16) Its a valuable marketing and selling tool for businesses.(17) How interesting to think of the many new ways that this technology shaping our future. -- Exhibit -Sentence 17:How interesting to think of the many new ways that this technology shaping our future. Which is the best way to write the underlined portion of sentence 17? If the original is the best way, choose optionA.

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Making a Budget
(A)

• A. remove sentence 4
• B. move sentence 4 to follow sentence 2
• C. no revision is necessary
• D. move sentence 4 to the beginning of paragraph A
• E. Making a budget is very easy if you no the basic procedure and a few principles.B.First, writing down all your income for one month.C.Income, including your paycheck or other checks from Social Security and the government, means all the money you receive.D.Next, figure out all your regular monthly expenses.E.Rent and utilities are important regular expenses; you should also include expenses for food and medicine you take regularly.(6) You must not forget because they add up, the smaller monthly bills such as payments for credit cards, interest on loans, and insurance.
  (B)
  (7)
  You also should keep track of minor daily expenses because you probably spend more on them than you realize.(8) These includes purchases of such things as sodas, snacks, newspapers, magazines, and candy.(9) Add them up for a week and then multiply the weekly total by the number of weeks in the month to determine the total monthly cost.(10) Transportation costs, such as bus and subway fairs along with gasoline and tolls, should also be calculated as monthly expenses.
  (C)
  (11)
  Finally, it's important to plan as much as possible for special expenses, such as visits to doctors and dentists and repairs to your home or car.(12) Gifts for such events as Christmas and birthdays are other kinds of expenses you can plan for certain months.(13) Other activities, such as celebrating a holiday or taking a vacation, often demand extra spending, too.(14) Some months may also require you according to the season to buy new clothes.(15) By preparing a budget in all these areas, you can figure out how much money you need for each month, this will help you watch your spending and may help you to save for the future. -- Exhibit -Sentence Next, figure out all your regular monthly expenses. Which revision should be made to the placement of sentence 4?
• F. move sentence 4 to follow sentence 5